erotic/romantic/pornographic poetry

[southsamurai]

does anyone in the world still write erotic poetry? and heck does it even matter anymore in the modern age of porn and internet? im a hack, but since this is one i wrote back in high school i figure i'd use it as an example




TOGETHER

Probing soft, yielding flesh
Pressure of seeking fingers
Leaving loving bruises
That disappear in seconds

A nimble fingered hand
Climbs her fleshy thighs
Followed by two longing, questing lips
Onward, upward, to the sweet heart of ecstasy

Slow, sensual movement
Speaking with lustful tongues
A lexicon of moans and kisses
Speaking our emotions for us

Gentle emotion motions
Slipping on, on, on, and up
Along the path of shared pleasure and love
To an irresistible oneness of mind body and soul

Softly caressing
Touching, whispering our love
Beginning the slow descent
From the height of pleasure to the valley of love

 

[bob]

Beginning the slow descent
From the height of pleasure to the valley of love

that's very nice SS

 

[mynameisbob84]

I dabble in heavily romanticised, erotic rap verses...

Hey, bb
You're so fine
You're so fine you blow my... dick?
Just the tip?
I'll give you a nice tip...

You know you want to
What do you mean
You don't want to?
You do too
Fine, fuck it, fuck you

I'm sorry, bb
I didn't mean it
Will you suck your tit?
Do it like you mean it
Now do a shit and play with it

You know you want to
What do you mean
You don't want to?
You do too
Fine, fuck it, and fuck you too

:?

 

[Adreaming]

Congratulations !!! It sound awesome to me...

 

[camstory]

does anyone in the world still write erotic poetry? and heck does it even matter anymore in the modern age of porn and internet? im a hack, but since this is one i wrote back in high school i figure i'd use it as an example




TOGETHER

Probing soft, yielding flesh Ttp
Pressure of seeking fingers
Leaving loving bruises
That disappear in seconds

A nimble fingered hand
Climbs her fleshy thighs
Followed by two longing, questing lips
Onward, upward, to the sweet heart of ecstasy
Cc
Slow, sensual movement
Speaking with lustful tongues
A lexicon of moans and kisses
Speaking our emotions for us

Gentle emotion motions
Slipping on, on, on, and up
Along the path of shared pleasure and love
To an irresistible oneness of mind body and soul

Softly caressing
Touching, whispering our love
Beginning the slow descent
From the height of pleasure to the valley of love

First, I thought it was very nice as a poem, and am surprised that a HS aged person would articulate the act of love making so well. Not that it is profound in that, but beyond where I was. I was screwing in HS and though I'm sure I had experienced a oneness I hadn't tune in to that at that age.

But I liked, and think maybe this thread has not to many looks yet, seems more thanks would be in order. And Bob you did something that aggravates me a little. You praised the post but did not thank. Seems to happen to me lots and I can't figure it out???

Also think the nicest line may be for me, "Leaving loving brusies"